Great understanding of the thriller conventions and how you have used and developed them but as I am sure you are aware, it is the technology aspect letting you down. You need to complete this video podcast so that there are no black patches!!!!! You need to show your own film a lot more - every time you talk about what you have done show it! But don't linger too long on one image/video as the images should move at a good pace to maintain audience interest. When you talk about how you have used editing (over and under cranking) you are a bit vague about when you used it, try to be more specific. I think you need to adjust some of you volume levels esp about the 7 min mark where Sarah is talking - she is much louder that what comes before or after.
Great understanding of the thriller conventions and how you have used and developed them but as I am sure you are aware, it is the technology aspect letting you down. You need to complete this video podcast so that there are no black patches!!!!! You need to show your own film a lot more - every time you talk about what you have done show it! But don't linger too long on one image/video as the images should move at a good pace to maintain audience interest. When you talk about how you have used editing (over and under cranking) you are a bit vague about when you used it, try to be more specific. I think you need to adjust some of you volume levels esp about the 7 min mark where Sarah is talking - she is much louder that what comes before or after.
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